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Exodus
SF novel-in-progress, i need help on dialogue
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Can u pls review Cortez Shivick(Chapter 9)
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@HJYoung Welcome to YWS! I'll be reviewing your writing tmw.

Thanks!
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Hi, BrokenHeartsAri here to drop some poems that need some reviews.

1.I'm coming home

2.Broken

I hope you get a chance to check these out!
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Okay! I'll see if I can review them this weekend.

Thanks for the request!
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@BrokenHeartsAri I'm so sorry for the time it took me to review it. I didn't have enough time since I started judging for April Madness. Fortunately, I had reviewed the first poem!

Again I'm very sorry and hope it is okay with you.

Have a nice day!
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Hi there.

I was wondering if you could review my novel. I currently have 7 chapters and was looking for someone to read the novel as I wrote it.

It's an action\adventure\fantasy novel.

Here's the links to the parts I currently have.

Prologue: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue

1: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1

2: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 2

3: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3

4: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 4

5: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 5

6: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 6

Thank you in advance. :D

Best regards
Felistia




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@felistia @BrokenHeartsAri Sorry for the late reply and review. As I posted on my wall, there was no internet in my country for about 40 days, and it just came back a few days ago.I will try to review them as fast as I can.

Thanks!
~Chris Calaid




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@BrokenHeartsAri I reviewed all your requested poems. Thank you for the request!
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Hey there, ChrisCalaid! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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