Reviews by Clary

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Clarity
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Mon Sep 03, 2018 4:54 pm
Clarity says... · Mon Sep 03, 2018 4:54 pm
I'll review any category and any genre.

Please don't ask for more than 2 reviews a week.

I'll let you know when I'll have your review done by and if it looks like it'll be longer than anticipated then I'll let you know! :)

~ Clary
Last edited by Clarity on Mon Mar 04, 2019 1:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


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Lumi
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Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:17 pm
Lumi says... · Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:17 pm
is a poam
is a sad
is it gucci?
or is it bad? :(
-a poem about me requesting your genius

wrist-a-wrist


also: 125 bonus points for reviewing it for meeeee.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.




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Clarity
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Sat Sep 08, 2018 8:16 pm
Clarity says... · Sat Sep 08, 2018 8:16 pm
1 review coming up @Lumi :)
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


Home is where the books are kept.




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alliyah
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Fri Sep 28, 2018 7:37 pm
alliyah says... · Fri Sep 28, 2018 7:37 pm
sneaks in to request a review for lack of water
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Clarity
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Sat Sep 29, 2018 2:48 am
Clarity says... · Sat Sep 29, 2018 2:48 am
I’ll get on this Sunday @alliyah <3
Edit - life sorry, I’ll do it today
Last edited by Clarity on Wed Oct 03, 2018 8:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


Home is where the books are kept.




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Aley
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Clarity
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Fri Oct 05, 2018 7:46 am
Clarity says... · Fri Oct 05, 2018 7:46 am
@Messenger @Aley I'll get to these today/tomorrow :)
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

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Home is where the books are kept.




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Lightsong
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Sun Oct 07, 2018 5:34 am
Lightsong says... · Sun Oct 07, 2018 5:34 am
Chapter 22.1: Gael

Yeah, it's late into the novel, but I'll be pleased if you could review it! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Starve
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Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:30 pm
Starve says... · Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:30 pm
Hi Clarity

Could you please review Momma's Boy ?

It has a few reviews already, but I have made major edits since then, and there is an important short story writing competition coming up in December so I would like to get better.
I will appreciate any and all criticism that you have, and I'll happily re-edit it too, if it keeps the story in the 1k word range.
Thanks




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FireSpyGirl
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Fri Oct 12, 2018 10:07 pm
FireSpyGirl says... · Fri Oct 12, 2018 10:07 pm
Will you please review the first chapter of my book? It's called A young spy and A young cop
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart




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kostia
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Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:36 pm
kostia says... · Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:36 pm
Hello there! I would highly appreciate if you can find some time to read a small piece I recently wrote. I m thinking about adding it to a novel I m working on but I m not sure about the story line. It is a first draft and there might be some typos in it.
The title is Better than nicotine.
Thank you for your time

Better than nicotine
“There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self.”
― Ernest Hemingway




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TheDepressedCat
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 9:27 pm
TheDepressedCat says... · Tue Nov 27, 2018 9:27 pm
Can you please review my prologue of 'The Horrors of Discovering'? Thanks!




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bigsisfarmer
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Fri Nov 30, 2018 2:38 pm
bigsisfarmer says... · Fri Nov 30, 2018 2:38 pm
Could you please review at least the second chapter of my story? (You can do both if you really want too but don't feel pressured.) Thanks!

Taking Blood - The Creature Inside Chapter 2
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Message me about anything! I'm always willing to talk.




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Rascalover
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Fri Dec 07, 2018 9:24 am
Rascalover says... · Fri Dec 07, 2018 9:24 am
Can you please review the second chapter of my story?

The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 2)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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