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Hello! Moalex here looking for a review on my fantasy story. After lots of drafts and proofreading, I was wondering if anybody would like to read it and provide an honest review. Please be as honest as possible, I would like to know if it made the reader feel, if you liked it or disliked it, boring, entertaining, good, bad, etc etc. Please and thank you!

The Wrong Era: Chapter 1

I have an essay due this Sunday (2/18/18) and I would really like to get some opinions on it before I have to turn it in. (if you're reading this after that I always appreciate opinions on my work, however getting reviews on this specific one won't be as important then)

Reaching Wide Audiences in Serialized Television Shows

Note: What I have here is just the body of the essay. I do have a copy that is formatted in APA with citations, it just isn't compatible with posting on YWS.

can someone review this it is for a school assignment due 2/28/2018 if you could review before then or the morning of that would be wonderful The last to escape from Caranar

I would like to have some review on my work Devil's Disguise Chapter 2

I would like someone to review my work Reality chapter 1.

Hi, I'd really appreciate it if someone would review my poem The Dream of Night

I would like my work Reality chapter 2 reviewed. THANK YOU

All right people, my works are open to reviewing. Please check out the following-
Jack Cat the case of Macho Gato
Otherwordly Hero (It doesn't have gore-just minor violence-the kind we are used to seeing on TV . . .) and there is zero lanquage.
Crown of Me
Worlds Away From Us
Please check those works out-and thank you before hand for doing so.

Hi, I would like my work, Reality chapter 4 reviewed. THANKS.

I am requesting your assistance in reviewing my work, XT note collection Carnixia.
I know it's not a poem or a novel but please give it a look it's not as boring as it seems thanks.

Alison

I would love for someone to review my work, SixTeen.
SixTeen
Thank you!

Hey, everyone, this is Kman134. I had just finished chapter 6 of Magician's Wars. however, I'm not really sure if it's good or not. Here's a link to my new chapter and I want to know what you all think.

Magician's Wars Chapter 6

Hi everyone. I've posted a new chapter on YWS its called Life or Death ~ book one it Begins Chapter 2 and it hasn't got any reviews yet, and I really want an honest opinion on it. I really want to make my writing better so getting some feedback would be really great. So would anyone like to have a look at it?


Hear is the link. Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 2

Thank you everyone.

I would love if someone could review my short story,
The Fighter and the Dragon.

The Fighter and the Dragon