Well, as long as this thread is here I might as well post a link to the first extract of my fantasy novel centred around a race of winged humans (I've coined them "Airbornes"). It's here if you want to have a read.
Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx
Hey, I have already gotten two helpful reviews on my short story "Aged paper, ink and dust" but I would totally appreciate a few more since I have to have a final copy of it due Wednesday for my AP Literature class. I don't know how to insert links but I would if I could.
"So come with me where Dreamers are born and Time is never planned, Just think of happy things, And your heart will fly on wings, in Never Never Land."-Peter Pan
"Life is the art of Drawing... without an eraser."
I need some reviews to improve myself and my work since this my first time joining such wonderful community of writers. If you like humor, come and go check this out Toilet is Life . If you want some more, go and check out my profile.
I would really appreciate just one more review on my piece Prologue: Monkey Wrench. It already has 2 reviews, but one of those reviews was fairly short and it would be very helpful to have 1 more person give some input. Thanks in advance!
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Sorry to be picky, but if you can only find one or two tiny things to fix, please leave the reviewing for someone harsher and post your opinion as a comment. I really want to make this good and need to know what's wrong with it and what can be made better, not what's already good. Thank you.
I bought acactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert. -Demetri Martin
I would be very grateful if someone reviewed my one chapter short story Malec fanfiction titled "Exiting the Clave's Strict Closet (Malec Fanfiction)" based on the New York Times Bestselling Series "The Mortal Instruments" by Cassandra Clare, more popularly known by the netflix television series "Shadowhunters" (which is so unworthy of being a show, it is seriously ABSOLUTELY NOTHING like the books). Though, you do not need to know the background to read/review the piece.
