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Hi! Could anyone please review my short story (divided into 4 parts)?

(so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/4

The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4 Would anyone mind reading and reviewing? Thanks.

Can anyone have a look at any of the three poems I have posted? Thanks x
Sinking, Thinking, Blinking
The Want to Look Up
The Worry Child

@LizzieH3 can you leave some links here to a particular poem or two that you really want more feedback on? That way whoever looks will have a clearer idea of where to start#

Would like someone to review my literary/alcohol experiment - Last Exit to Now/Here

Would anyone like to review my very short flash fiction piece? It's an experiment in 2nd POV, so it needs the constructive criticism, ha! It's called The Lake and the Stars.

The Lake and the Stars

REVIEW MY WORK PLEASE

Could someone (or everyone) review my work called ~Suckers 3~ I need some feedback!

Thank you!

Izzy

I would love a review on chapter one on my fantasy novel, "The Fate Of The Sorcerers."

Don't forget to leave a link to the work you want reviewed! Otherwise potential reviewers won't know where to find it.

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Hi! I was hoping I could get my one act play reviewed? I definitely understand if you can't or won't, it's a bit long, but I figured I'd ask. Thank you!

[url http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work ... lay-138242]

Basically - would be quite thankful if anybody would review my monologue.
Exit monologue (for a situationship)

Hi everyone.

My name is Daccari and I'm looking to have the sequel of an elemental
fantasy series reviewed by anyone interested in the fantasy genre.

I've included the back cover blurb below to give you a feel for the book.

To save the one you love, be prepared to risk it all.

Five years have passed since the fateful day that led to her husband’s demise: Violetta prays that her daughter never learns the truth, but that’s not the only thing she hopes never rises to the surface.

With a mysterious storm blanketing Peradon, Violetta, Lord Jork, and Xyhoni set out to uncover its source. The last thing they expected was for her young daughter to vanish. As troubling rumours swell, Violetta reaches her wits end. Now she must journey through the four realms to find answers and recover her daughter before it’s too late.

https://www.amazon.com/Symbiote-Peradon-Fantasy-Book-2-ebook/dp/B078LNSLDD/

I joined YWS a few days ago and I've posted two of my works so far. So if anyone could please review my works.

Thank you!

@emma1045 --> I'd love to review something of yours. I'm sure others would as well if you could link them in your post!

Hello! I'd like reviews on this work, please! I'd only like feedback on the plot and story, not grammar, please! Thank you!

aishite