Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.
So, first thing I notice is that well, I didn't notice anything wrong! The flow was great and loved the different perspectives in the poem! I think my favorite stanza was
"Dancing in a brightly coloured room,
Pajamas and woolly socks on.
“I love this song”,
A fountain of giggles."
I like how it was worded and it flowed together so well.
Now is when I dissect your poem and see if I can't get its meaning right! So, in your poem you are telling us, the reader, the different perspectives of others lives at the same moment, no? How others look at there life and how they may or may not be enjoying it. How they spend the day and who they hang out with.
Overall I loved the poem, the way it was worded and the different views and keep up the good work! Happy Halloween! I really need to go now Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. He has a problem, seriously. Cheerio and fruit loops to you!
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