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Re: In Stillness
This poem is really good even though I think it should have some rhymes.
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Winter Nights: The Truth of January
Hey! I love this poem about January but was the "J a n u a r y" supposed to be like that or did you do it by accident, I ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Goodbye
I like your poem very much but you've made mistakes like "gunna" I think you've made a mistake there and "comands" I don't think you spell it correctly. Is this ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Best friends
Thank you for reiviewing my work and I will improve my work.:)
Jan 21, 2013 -
Re: The place we used to meet
Hey there! I loved your poem how it's emotional and about a friendship with someone it is really good. I like it how you didn't make it rhyme after every ...
Jan 19, 2013 -
Re: Reconnect
Hi Durriedog! I love your work but you have made a few mistakes such as: "I don't really havce a name for it, and i don't really know if it ...
Jan 19, 2013 -
Re: Best friends
Thank you
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Best friends
Thank you
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Best friends
Thank you.
Jan 16, 2013 - Re: Working Title: Withering Jan 15, 2013
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Re: The Tree
This is a great poem but I would recommend for you to add a some more rhymes and decrease some of the lines so when you put a word to ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Please Take Care
This poem is not to bad but it is very very good.
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: I am Blind
This was very very good more like excellent. I think you should keep writing poems because this one is fabulous.
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: Poem 1
This is a good poem even though it creeps me out a lot I might even have nightmares after this.
Jan 5, 2013 -
Re: Dancers at night
This poem is great but I think it could improve a bit.
Jan 5, 2013
