It's great..short and effective in what its trying to convey to the readers..
Of course, rest have covers the necessary basics.
The last stanza could have been a superb piece, but tomorrow, continue and forever doesn't fit with each other as they are not supposed to..you describe a specific time which in yours is eternal, I suppose, which is ruined by these three words together but as I told you it's great.
Regards,
Blakey!
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