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Hey Ninjaudrey! I like your poem but there are a few things which keeps bugging me. Firstly the lines "If there was a rose it wouldn't be a perfect rose" ...

Hey there Live1out2loud7! I like this poem but I think there might be a few confusing lines so I will just tell them now. Firstly you did a lot of ...

Hey there, Purple Moment. I don't think I have reviewed your work before so this is my first the start I didn't understand this but then when I kept on ...

Hello Anriban! I will just get straight into the topic. I love your poem but you have made a few sentences you could fix up like the sentence "I wouldn't ...

Hey Kayfortnight! I love this poem it is very unique. You have made me a little confused with some of the lines like the first one "o my father, o ...

Hello I love your poem but you have made mistakes like "as the trans get closer" I think there is a problem there. Your poem is excellent.

Hi Adriana12Alexis! i love this poem because of the rhymes and how it's not only about it's title. i hope you write more poems.

This is a great poem but you have made a few mistakes. You have made a lot of mistakes such "Im" instead of "I'm".

This is a good poem but this line " but you opened up another door, N now your with her" I think the "N" was supposed to mean and. This ...

This is a great song. I think it is supposed to be a short song except you have the chorus repeating I think you should just write back to the ...

Wow! I am so amazed this is a poem that I wanted to hear for years.

I am not sure if this is a riddle or a poem but it is great.

This is a great poem but I think you should put punctuational in the right area like speech marks.

This is not to bad but I am not trying to be offensive I am just saying that it could change a little.