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Hey Aleta! You're piece seem very interesting and I quite enjoyed parts of it, but I must say I think you can make it a little cohesive. I think the ...

Hey Hannah! I really like your poem, because it seemed a bit different, which at times confused me. I was caught between two ideas of what the poem was based ...

Hey thanataphobic! You're piece seemed angsty yet saddening, and I think it's quite clear that it's about heartbreak. I like the cohesiveness of the paragraphs, although there were a few ...

Hey Gravity! I thought this was and interesting piece and I liked it quite a bit, even though I'm not a fan of gore. I also found this a little ...

Hey Judge94, I quite liked your poem, because it was different. I kinda like the whole idea of sun-drenched. There are still places to improve though. I find it a ...

Hey Morrigun! Your piece was pretty good, and I hope this isn't written from experience, if it is I hope you're well now. I liked how it was very cohesive ...

Hey AkanshaD! I really liked your piece especially since I'm able to relate a lot... well to the relatives part, and I think it's because I'm from Sri Lanka and ...

Hey speakerskat! Your poem was pretty impressive, but I have to say it's a little confusing. Lemme start with the small things first though. More punctuation, capitol letters and all ...

Hi Falconer! I LOVED the poem a lot, really does give you the feeling of confinement. I do think you could still improve your poem a bit. Don't let the ...

Hey Shaon! This is the second piece of yours I'm reviewing, and I loved it. This is such a beautiful poem and I love the way your references are perfect ...

Hey Eros! I think this is my most favourite poem, I loved every bit of it. I can feel the emotion in this piece of writing and I think that's ...

Hey Shaon! I love your poem, I was very impressed. I like how all your verses have a connection to the cherry except maybe the second-last. I also love how ...

Hey Annaclare! This poem is simple and it is realistic. You could also improve it though, you know spelling and punctuation. So here are some things you could improve on: ...

Hey Noelle, I like your poem but it could use some improvements. Firstly I'd like to point out things you could improve on: 1. Overall your poem doesn't have any ...

Hi ILoveBooks123! Welcome to YWS. Hope you are enjoying your time here. This is my first review in 5 months so just tell me if I make any mistakes in ...