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It would be better if it was in a different format, but I like the thought that you have introduced. The idea of the poem is that there is a ...

Beautiful poem that moved my heart. Nitpicks: Capital Letters- totally up to you, but I think that some capitals would improve it alot. Whenever I see A sentence without a ...

that is beautiful. I love how you captured the essence of childhood freedom with no worries. I felt like a small child with the joy of jumping in rain puddles. ...

Wow! The way this poem is arranged is wonderful! I always feel great when I see poetry that is arranged in clever and unique ways. I find it hard to ...

Yubbies here with an amazing review that has some humor too. a perfect poem to read on a perfect day. Your vivid description placed images into my head. My favorite ...

My dooms-day The good stuff: 1.the rhyme. I enjoy poetry that rhymes. I appreciate the effort that is put into these poems. 2. The concept behind the poem, though often ...

Good job. I never thought about writing like that. Writing a story about someone writing a story. I Found this an enjoyable read. I like how she is writing in ...

My dooms-Day The good stuff: 1. A true poem! This moves me to do something, I don't know what I should do, but it moves me. 2. Rhyme! I know ...

This is true about how time passes. You have captured this in a snapshot photo. I commend you for this. The good stuff: 1. I like all of the uses ...

This poem seems a little bit confusing. I can see what you're getting at, but it is hard to understand. The Good Stuff: 1. You used a lot of good ...

Listen. The good stuff: 1: A simple rhythm. 2. A good rhyme scheme- except for the first stanza. 3. A simple message that needs to be shared with the world! ...

An amazing poem with a simple story. An enjoyable read. The Good Stuff: 1: Description. Black as silk. glistening stars. Right on! 2. Narrative. I don't see too many of ...

A very simple piece of poetry that could move mountains. It's true! We have to take that first step but then we decide what happens next! The good stuff: 1. ...

Locked away. Wow. What a concept. Leaving yourself, your secrets, your very essence locked up. Wow. The good stuff: 1. Has a point to it. I've read alot of poetry ...

This is true. This is true. This is true. You have captured into words what all girls think, but in a different way than what we would expect. This moved ...