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A blanket of white roses
A(space)drop of cherry brine,
Black velvit curtain closes(,)
Green grass sprouts it(at, instead of it?) the line(,)
Cloudy warm air flowing(,)
A river crystle blue(,)
Ignorence is knowing(,)
The gates I can't pass through(.)
I really like this, its wonderful. That's all I have to say.
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