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I really liked this chapter, despite the length. There were a few things that confused me, though, and I had to reread the part where Jessie came in several times. ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to get to this. I was out of town, but now I'm back, so let's get to that critique! I absolutely loved ...

Well, I liked the beginning. It was exactly how I felt about a month ago. You're just sitting there listening to love songs, wondering what the h*** is wrong with ...

Hey, sorry it took me so long to review this. I was out of town all weekend. Now, with that out of the way, lets get to the review. I ...

Sorry it took me so long to review this. I was out of town all weekend. But lets get to the review, shall we? Wow. What an unexpected twist. I ...

I love how you enriched the two main characters. You gave me a reason to love Jessie, and a reason to enjoy Merry's point of view. I like that about ...

Okay, I'm not much for nit picks, you'll have to forgive me for that, but I really thought this piece was amazing. I could totally relate to the rejection that ...

This was a great follow-up to part one. It needs a little work as far as imagery goes, but it's a good, solid piece. I could feel the tension rolling ...

Let me catch my breath. Okay. Wow, this was amazing. I felt like I was actually running with the rebels. It got a little confusing, though, when James is tied ...

This piece intrigued me from the very beginning. It was a little hard to follow, but other than that, it was a good, solid piece. Wow. I started to see ...

Hey! I was wandering aimlessly around YWS and I saw that you had posted another chapter of Let Me Love You! It was awesome, as usual, and I'm dying to ...

Hey, it's me again! I just wanted to tell you that I have read another chapter and it's great. The biggest thing that needs work is how much you tell/show. ...

This chapter is just as wonderful as the first! It's amazing. You're confusing me, though. You say Isabella has had romantic feelings for Gary, but then she's breaking down crying ...

Well, wow again. I know that's pretty much all I say, but it seems like there isn't much TO say. You say it all in your stories. This is great. ...

The story line is wonderful! I feel myself falling into the chapter, but it seems like when Jay and Gary are talking to each other that they shouldn't be using ...