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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Selfish Desires

    Greetings! I have arrived from the land of Yosh to review this literary work! In other words, let's get started! I am the Cook, I feed those who are hungry. ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my pumpkin patch

    Heyo mage. Yoshi here for a review! This is quite an interesting poem. The first stanza had a few things that popped out to me."Summer soil" and "Sun-baked earth" were ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: They Stood Across the Graveyard

    Welcome to YWS! You can call me Yoshi. Hope you have a fun time here! They stood across the graveyard Of those by temptation claimed The tombs lay weeping, shroud ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Satire, Spiritual Re: Mercury

    Hi Kelisot! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here! Let's play a fun game A game of cards! The loser will drink the mercury Of Gods' Ichor. ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 3 (Reworked)

    Heyo i'm back! Again, Léonard had hardly slept. yikes he probably needs to do something about his sleep. i sense an unhealthy pattern . . . He had to go ...

    Aug 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Legend of Ekibastus

    Alright, I just got back from lunch! Since I'm low on review points, I'll get back to reviewing (hopefully on your works. Also, I promise to review LoaMR, but I ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: [Door-stopper]

    Haven't done a review in a while, so I'll just pop in here! Hi Lim!!!! So there's nothing specific I want to critique about, so I'll just rant what I ...

    Jul 7, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad

    Heyo it's InuYosha for a short review!!!! I don’t remember things that easily, but what I do remember in my almost-teenage years is that it was super cold outside. I ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Shenanigans of Ruby Oak and Her Crew: The Adventurer Association

    Heyo! InuYosha here for a review! First, that is quite a long title ahaha. Anyways, we shall begin this review! About the little note at the beginning- I would suggest ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Art » Other, Dramatic Re: The owl

    aw what a nice owl. I like how the owl pays respects to the mouse. Anyways, let's get this review GOING So your first two lines seem to talk about ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: The nature's feelings and tragedy

    Heyo, InuYosha here for a review! First, I like the font ahaha. However, I wonder why you chose Comic Sans as your font. Since you've clearly stated that this is ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 2 (Reworked)

    WELL I JUST NOTICED THAT THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE HAD NOT BEEN YET REVIEWED. Anyways, hello! I'll pop in for a little review. I'll try to review these as well as ...

    Apr 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Other Re: Exodus-Part One

    Hey there! I'm here for a requested review! First off, let's talk about the length. I know I've already told you this, but this story has a serious length issue. ...

    Apr 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Revolutionary

    I am speechless. Seriously. I would never be able to review a masterpiece like this I'M SO SORRY IT WOULD JUST BE A BUNCH OF COMPLIMENTS. speaking of compliments-- let's ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Thought Patterns

    Hi @Zenith! I'm here for your requested review! Good work! This is an intriguing story to say the least. Pretty spooky. The diner was uncharacteristically full for that time of ...

    Feb 17, 2021


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