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Re: Selfish Desires
Greetings! I have arrived from the land of Yosh to review this literary work! In other words, let's get started! I am the Cook, I feed those who are hungry. ...
Aug 10, 2021 -
Re: my pumpkin patch
Heyo mage. Yoshi here for a review! This is quite an interesting poem. The first stanza had a few things that popped out to me."Summer soil" and "Sun-baked earth" were ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: They Stood Across the Graveyard
Welcome to YWS! You can call me Yoshi. Hope you have a fun time here! They stood across the graveyard Of those by temptation claimed The tombs lay weeping, shroud ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: Mercury
Hi Kelisot! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here! Let's play a fun game A game of cards! The loser will drink the mercury Of Gods' Ichor. ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 3 (Reworked)
Heyo i'm back! Again, Léonard had hardly slept. yikes he probably needs to do something about his sleep. i sense an unhealthy pattern . . . He had to go ...
Aug 1, 2021 -
Re: The Legend of Ekibastus
Alright, I just got back from lunch! Since I'm low on review points, I'll get back to reviewing (hopefully on your works. Also, I promise to review LoaMR, but I ...
Jul 30, 2021 -
Re: [Door-stopper]
Haven't done a review in a while, so I'll just pop in here! Hi Lim!!!! So there's nothing specific I want to critique about, so I'll just rant what I ...
Jul 7, 2021 -
Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad
Heyo it's InuYosha for a short review!!!! I don’t remember things that easily, but what I do remember in my almost-teenage years is that it was super cold outside. I ...
Jun 10, 2021 -
Re: The Shenanigans of Ruby Oak and Her Crew: The Adventurer Association
Heyo! InuYosha here for a review! First, that is quite a long title ahaha. Anyways, we shall begin this review! About the little note at the beginning- I would suggest ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: The owl
aw what a nice owl. I like how the owl pays respects to the mouse. Anyways, let's get this review GOING So your first two lines seem to talk about ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: The nature's feelings and tragedy
Heyo, InuYosha here for a review! First, I like the font ahaha. However, I wonder why you chose Comic Sans as your font. Since you've clearly stated that this is ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 2 (Reworked)
WELL I JUST NOTICED THAT THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE HAD NOT BEEN YET REVIEWED. Anyways, hello! I'll pop in for a little review. I'll try to review these as well as ...
Apr 20, 2021 -
Re: Exodus-Part One
Hey there! I'm here for a requested review! First off, let's talk about the length. I know I've already told you this, but this story has a serious length issue. ...
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: The Revolutionary
I am speechless. Seriously. I would never be able to review a masterpiece like this I'M SO SORRY IT WOULD JUST BE A BUNCH OF COMPLIMENTS. speaking of compliments-- let's ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Thought Patterns
Hi @Zenith! I'm here for your requested review! Good work! This is an intriguing story to say the least. Pretty spooky. The diner was uncharacteristically full for that time of ...
Feb 17, 2021
