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Hewwo! Review time!!!!! The past is to long to forget, all the memories that happened between me and you. All the times we laughed, cried, and screamed for no reason. ...

I'm BACC! The next morning dawned with golden light seeping through the dining room windows. The large room was simply decorated with local products-- handcrafted furniture, locally painted portraits,

REVIEW TIME!! Awesome poem! I love it! (I like chocolate too, so I can totally relate) All of the Chocolate is gone, But not in my belly, Because that is ...

Hi! Very nice poem. It's powerful and romantic. A perfect start for a longform poem! Have you ever loved someone so much you'd fight God for them? This is a ...

Hi! Wonderful story! I myself live in Texas actually lol. Anyways, the review. "It's all come down to this," Roy Davis sighed, just waiting for the cameras to kick on. ...

REVIEW TIME! and also idea time. Okay, I'm here for your review. Is your spacing here on purpose? Or is it just a formatting issue, because it's a bit hard ...

Hi Via! I'm here to give you your review! Harsh waves crash among a bed of empty shells. They jostle back and forth as their drain themselves of the wake. ...

Wow! Very interesting! I don't have much to say about this, since it's pretty good, so I'll make this a short review. I don't know what to do. Not that ...

Hi! This is a very amusing and interesting poem, so I'm here for your review! My Dear Enemy, I have a bone to pick with you. I think its the ...

Hi! I'm here for your THIRD review! (Haha, that's so selfless of me, right? SO NOBLE!) A feather of hope can float down from the sky. It can perch on ...

Hi! I'll give you a review! Minor Issues The cyber core, the power that was passed down to me from my dad. It ran deep into my veins, pouring through ...

Wassup! I'm here for your review! :D I lived in the abyss, And no one ever tried to free me from this. This pain that lurked around the corner, The ...

Nice poem! Minor Issues Our roads were once beautiful with mountains and valleys. I think the rhythm would flow better if you changed beautiful with a two syllable word like ...

Very good. I loved your similes! Frustration enters my skull, giving me a tumultuous headache as loud and as heavy as the ocean. If I’m lucky I’ll drown and sink ...

Oh. My. Gosh. How. How did you write something so . . . powerful. This was certainly one of the best stories I've ever read. The dystopian setting is very ...