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Hahaha this reminds me SO MUCH of "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson. Have you read that? Because these are SO SIMILAR. Anyways-- love the plot, I love everything plot-wise, theme-wise, ...

Awesome poem! This is such a cute poem

Mood. Big mood. I love the meter of this poem and especially its unpredictable progression! First off, I want to say that I like the ABCA rhyming of the first ...

Oh goodness gracious. Goodness gracious. Goodness, goodness, gracious. Momo, I have to say-- If I ever have nightmares from now on, it's going to be from that. You know how ...

WOOOO I'm here! Wow! This is a very good poem! So, hi NastyMajesty; I'm here for your review! First - Love the rhymes. Perfect, perfect, perfect. Although if there was ...

Hi @Valkyria! I realized that this awesome story didn't have any reviews, so I'm here to review this story! First off, this is a great story and has most of ...

Hi! I'm Yoshi, and I'm here to give you a review! Love this poem! It has very, very short lines, which makes it a little weird to me, but I ...

Hi! y0sh!'s here for your review! First, This poem made a great impression on me. I loved it so much. This seems to be a mostly descriptive poem with a ...

Interesting Fable you have here. At least I'm pretty sure that you meant for this to be a fable. Idk. If it is intentionally a fable, then I applaud you. ...

Hi! Nice story! It's certainly very interesting for an intro. As the nights grow cold and many prepare for winter, a new festive solstice begins. I believe this is a ...

Awesome work, @NastyMajesty ! I absolutely loved it! Even after reading this three times, I still love it! I do have a few things to say about this though. First, ...

Wow! I loved it! This is really old but doesn't have any reviews, so I wanted to give you a review just for no reason! So, I really like the ...

Wow! This is certainly an amusing poem! I absolutely love it! A few teeny tiny pointers though. "Bugger eyed" should be "Bugger-eyed" With "Miss happen" you probably meant "Misshapen" "...sept" ...

Nice poem! It's short but sweet. It's simple, yet beautiful. In fact, that sounds exactly like what a Haiku should be. Short, sweet, simple, beautiful. So, this could actually be ...

Hi! I have a review for you! So, this is a really interesting story! I absolutely love it! The ending was a traditional fairy tale ending even though it was ...