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Re: Star Shade, Chapter 3: Escape
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a short review. I have not read the earlier chapters, but from what I have gleamed so far, it appears as though there has ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter Four - Chop Shop
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a really brief review. Let me just start by saying that I really loved this chapter. The story flowed at a very good pace ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: .
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I can't believe that there is only one review so far. Putting that aside, you have the good story going here. The ...
May 14, 2016 -
Re: .
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I liked where this is going. We get to see Han's side of the story prior to him, Chewie, Luke and Oni-Wan ...
May 14, 2016 -
Re: .
Hey there, yihongt here to leave a review. Let me just say that as a Star Wars fan, I'm always happy to read stories set inside the Star Wars universe. ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter Three - The Devil's Marauder
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I know this chapter was published quite a while back, but I just came across it. I must say that I thoroughly ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Jim: Chapter 4
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just say that I enjoyed this piece of work. I must note that I haven't read the earlier chapters. That ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Starkeeper: Beyond the Red Halo [Chapter One]
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. As a fan of the science-fiction genre, I really loved this piece you have written. The world and the characters you've introduced ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Chosen
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying I love this short story you have written. It really drew me in and wanted to ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Learning to live again chapter 1
Hey there yizhongt here to leave a review. Now you have quite a number of grammar and spelling corrections you have to do for your piece of work. I'll try ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Faye Summers Ch 1: The One With the Broken Window
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I really liked the story. I felt that it flowed very well from one scene to the next. I'm curious to know ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: The Fox is Stuck Chapter 2: The Fox's Past
Hey there yizhongt here to leave a review. You have an interesting piece right here. It has great potential, but it is peppered with grammatical errors here and there. For ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. This is a good chapter you have here. It was very entertaining to read. I really like the way you described the ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Glossary
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I have to say that after reading your glossary, I am most interested in reading your story. It looks like you have ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Fallen Angel Pt. 1
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I have to say, I really enjoyed this piece. It flowed smoothly from one scene to the other. The language you have ...
Apr 6, 2016
