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Hello! I'm here for a review as requested. As you'd already know by now, I am not a professional poet. However, I did spot some mistakes that were easy to ...

Hello! I'm here for a review. I am no professional poet, but I do spot some slight mistakes here and there. Here are just a few of my nitpicks: "An ...

Hello! I'm here for a review! "A [brightly]-coloured [t-shirt], light denim shorts and pink flip flops." I spot a grammatical error here. A T-Shirt cannot be brightly-coloured, however it can ...

Hi there! I'm here for a review. ^_^ Firstly, I'd like to go on to the nitpicks. "“Whoa,” Kayden breathed out, stunned." As far as I know, 'stunned' brings a ...

Hi! I'm here for a review. The first mistake that I spotted was how you arranged the dialogues. A dialogue should start in another paragraph, and not continued in the ...

Hi! I'm here for a review. "I loved it, how could I not, it was my home but the place sent shivers up my spine." 'Shivers up my spine' sounds ...

Hi! I think you should write 'A/N' in bold before you start writing down the author's notes at the start of the story. xD I couldn't spot any grammatical errors; ...

Hi there! I'm here for a review. In the first line, you wrote "I think we might be outlaws." And in the seventh line, you wrote "We are just outlaws," ...

Hi there! :) This was incredibly amazing! I love how you constructed each line perfectly. I especially loved these: But before on paper, the words just melt And without your ...

HAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA xD This poem just blew me away. I had a good laugh x) It's been this long since I've read such a hilarious poem as this one. This just ...

Hi there! Lisa here for a review. I really liked how you constructed the first paragraph. It already blew me away. But, I've spotted this little typo. "Whether he lives ...

Hello there! I'm here for yet another review. "The class of 1 Caring was situated on the far left of a long building, enough for three classes. Opposite their building ...

I've read this for more than three times now. It's absolutely breathtaking. HOW DO YOU DESCRIBE THIS PRO ME JELLY T.T xD TEACH ME YOUR SKILLZ, MASTER I couldn't spot ...

Hi there! Lisa here for a review. "It was two-thirty pm on a cloudy Tuesday; she was dropping off a shared liability not dropping in for a drink." I'm not ...

Hi there! I'm here for a review. "(...) the sort of shade of green associated with envy." The sentence was very cleverly put together. I like how you creatively used ...