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This piece honestly does nothing for the reader. First of all, you should never call your work Untitled. Secondly, it's obvious that you wrote this within a time frame of ...

Hi, I really liked this. The imagery was good; and it's one of those poems that make me happy from reading it. :) The only thing that needs to be ...

I really liked this poem, and your structure was interesting. :smt002 But there are some mistakes that should be fixed. Who are you? Who am I? All around me there ...

To me this poem seems sloppy. Some parts of it rhyme, and some don't. The stanzas are different lengths. Also, I thought I new you, 'New' should be spelled 'knew'. ...

I loved the way you wrote this, how it seems playful, like a child really wrote it. I can't really think of any way you could improve it, because I ...

I liked the topic of this poem. And I liked the way the way you wrote it, too. There are some parts that I think could be better though. Also, ...

To be honest, this just bored me. No offense, but the whole song is a cliche, what you hear all the time when someone is in love with someone else. ...

Wow, this was really good! I don't think it needs to be improved, you put your real feelings into it, and it actually made me almost cry, because I can ...

I think this is a worn out topic, and cliche. Also, some of the things you said sound really awkward, like While tears stream as I cry boo hoo 'Boo ...

I think this poem is only filled with cliches and it has no real meaning. The rhyming sounds forced, like when it says Can you properly eat? And don't wiggle ...

This is a good poem, I like how original the formatting is. The only thing that stuck out to me was the part when it says 'flip the switch', I ...

Only in my dreams we will be together, I think you should put 'will' before 'we', it sounds a little less awkward. this is a agonizing thought to have. 'A' ...

This whole poem is just really cliche. You should try being more specific, and definitely think of a better title. Also, you should put punctuation in it. Fearing i will ...

I really like this, it sounds like something I might write. xD And right now I can't think of anything you can improve on, except for adding in punctuation, and ...

I like this, but it seems like it's lacking in rhythm on the last half. Maybe you could try to make all the lines around the same number of syllables ...