whitewolfpuppy

Hey there! This is a nice poem, I like it a lot due to the fact of how you may see the zoo in the future as well as what ...

Hey there! :3 I have to say, this is a story that almost made me tear up. I don't know what helped you create this piece but what ever it ...

Hey there! :3 I really like the depth of this poem, I think this poem has a lot of potential! I love it, everything seems to fit and flow to ...

Hey there :3 Well, I have a big problem... I don't know where your trying to go with this poem at all. Like PixieStix said, you do need to break ...

Hey there! :3 I have a few major thing's I'd love to talk about at the moment. Please don't take them harshly, I don't mean to be rude. :( 1. ...

Hey there! This poem is alright. Your style is very consistent. It's very appealing to the eyes and inviting to your reader. The length is right, but I do have ...

Okay... You have a big problem here. You have a lot of ??? where there should be apostrophes and this is not really inviting to the person reading the story. ...

Hey there! This is pretty neat, I am guessing that this is a prolog or maybe a summary of the novel you are going to write. If it is, you ...

Hey there :3 Nice to meet you, there's a few things I'd like to say about your piece. 1. Its very nice, I like the fact that you stick to ...

Okay here's a fact. This is so not cool. I can't even keep enough focus to stay on task with the story! I mean... The paragraphs are way to short ...

Hi :3 I have a few things I'd like to share with you. First off, the question on the " Our name" Do you intend it to be talking about ...

I have to say this is amazing, I think this is just phenomenal how you can write so little yet this means so much. I love the details of the ...

This is a deep and dark piece of work. As far as I can tell, I understand some what because I have been in a situation close to this. I ...