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Re: pantheon
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is absolutely STUNNING. Every single word is so incredibly intentional, and through each allusion and scene you describe, you hide ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: so much unsaid
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is absolutely gorgeous. It's written in the sort of way where you can tell the poet knows exactly what they're ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Missing you in Maine
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is lovely; the short lines and casual style makes it very personal, and the metaphors are absolutely gorgeous. "That you ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Surrender or Rise?
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is incredibly meaningful, and the story it tells is wonderful. Your writing style is very personal and down-to-earth. "Life would ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: A Girl Came From the Sea
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This short story is incredibly creative and explores topics not often thought of when most people consider the ocean. Your writing is ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: lost in the waves
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is lovely! The imagery throughout the whole thing serves to bring the reader to the scene you describe, and the ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: cold-weather friends
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: I absolutely love this poem; my jaw hung open as I reached the fourth stanza and saw the parallels. The writing in ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: nocturne of insomnia's anthem
Hello! Wallflower here for a quick review (: The first sentence of this poem immediately drew me in- it's intriguing and immediately poetic. Throughout this poem, the story you develop ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: the texture of flower petals
Hello! Wallflower here for a quick review (: "Contrary to traditional feminine ideals, there were no flowers in the cottage. No hyacinths, cherry blossoms, or daffodils. There were multiple scales ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: [Light floods in- - -]
Hello! Wallflower here for a quick review (: At first, the formatting of this poem threw me off, but once I started reading it began to make sense - it ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: Little brown feet
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: This poem is lovely! Its rhyme scheme and your word choices are wonderful; your writing style is very calming but upbeat. "They ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: A Tisket, A Tasket
Hello! Wallflower here for a quick review (: This poem is absolutely STUNNING. It's got the same kind of energy/rhyme scheme as a dark nursery rhyme- beautifully written, with a ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: Ode To The Woman Behind Me In Traffic Today
Hello! Wallflower here for a quick review (: This is a genuinely hilarious poem, and it's incredibly well done! The words and tone you've used to provide a parody of ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Blue
Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: Firstly, the main thing that really stuck out to me about this poem was how vivid your imagery is. Throughout the poem, ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: isolation, my old friend
I absolutely love this poem!! It's very beautifully and poetically written but at the same time doesn't hold back from being brutally real and honest. Your writing style is lovely, ...
Sep 2, 2021
