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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Three, pt 2
Hello! I have nothing to say for myself. It appears I am worse with keeping schedules than I thought. I am trying! Just mostly failing. Here is your review: It ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Three
Hello! I've realised that I picked an extraordinarily busy month to try to write a review every day - that said, I may miss a day or two, as I ...
May 10, 2022 -
Re: Chapter Two: The Fallen King, pt 2
Hello! Apologies for not reviewing the past couple of days; I've been super busy. Anyway, here for a quick review: "No, he gets that from his dad," She responded The ...
May 7, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Two
Hello! Here for another quick review: The city had four entrances, the two main gates, East and West, and the less-used, smaller South and North gates. Here, I would advise ...
May 3, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter One, Pt 2
He was atop the hill opposite the lighthouse, Here, I think you could replace "was" with "stood", which would make the sentence stronger. After Father had died, they had taken ...
May 2, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter One
Hello! Here for a quick review: Among his few responsibilities as Keeper of the Light, bearing the fire to the dead was one of them While each of these clauses ...
May 2, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Prologue
Hello! I'm planning on doing a review every day for this month, and have thus decided to read a bunch of the novels on here, so prepare to get a ...
May 2, 2022 -
Re: Wind & Pinwheels
Hello! This poem is absolutely stunning - it's vague in a mystical, mysterious way that shows more the ebb and flow of emotions than what is causing them. Correct me ...
May 1, 2022 -
Re: To Sit on the Edge of the Moon
Hello! First off, I absolutely LOVE this. Your descriptions and imagery are so vivid and beautiful!! I sit on the moon's round rim and um a half forgotten harmoney, fiddling ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: Mice and Men Have Second Tries
Hello! This poem is very beautiful; the themes of it are absolutely lovely, and the point you're making about finding joy and happiness in the smallest of things is fantastic. ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: Puzzles and Papyrus
Hello! This is a very interesting poem with many possibilities for interpretation. The first portion, I think, is about a man who realises that, this whole time, he's been loving ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: Rhyming "Jack"
Hello! This poem is absolutely incredible, and so creative??? Your rhymes are clever and provide a perfect fairytale feel for a poem such as this, and the jaunty rhythm provides ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: House Fire
Hello!! Wayward here with a quick review (: This poem is lovely! It's very interesting how, among the physical description of the fires and what all was collapsing, you wove ...
Apr 22, 2022 -
Re: Conflict Me, My Sweet Memory Part 1
Hello! Wayward here with a quick review (: I'm. in love with this. Your poetry style is very unique and absolutely beautiful!! Take me, bind me, and leave me behind, ...
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Re: Fear of the Water
Hello! Wanderer here with a quick review (: The symmetry of this poem is incredibly clever, and the use of water as fluid movement to tell the story in pieces ...
Apr 8, 2022
