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  • Art » Chickens, Dramatic Re: A day in the life of an ordinary chick

    woah, this is so unique!! I was expecting something written but I'm so glad I came across this. this is the first time that I've seen artwork here. your drawing ...

    Feb 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Resolutions

    hello!! to put it simply: this poem is beautiful. everything about it is so well put together and i adore the whole "time" theme. each line is so meaningful, and ...

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goodbye Poem.

    hello!! this is a very beautiful poem. you described growth so well, the idea of striving for a better life, then realizing that YOU have to give yourself that life, ...

    Jan 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Art of Deception.

    hello! welcome to YWS 😃 I love this piece so much. The suspense and drama, the entire impression of it is so enthralling, it's very poetic. I love how the ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Millennium Later - Chapter One

    hello! welcome to YWS first of all, I need to applaud you for your cliffhanger. so well written 👏. I really enjoyed this first chapter because of the suspense. Writing ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: People Like Us

    hello!! welcome to YWS I find this entire poem very beautiful. I love how it's a comparison of lost people and found people, and how none of them have perfect ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky of Imagination washed away

    hi! you did such a good job of portraying the whole theme (which is growing up, I believe) throughout the entire poem. and I LOVEE angsty poetry and just in ...

    Jan 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: the poems i write at unholy hours of night

    hello!! okay firstly the title, it's so captivating and eye-catching. It resonates with the poems since you can have so many strange thoughts and random poem ideas (mostly) at night. ...

    Jan 15, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: to you, my love from far away

    hello! okay, first of all, I love the whole aesthetic setup for this. your mood board really matches up with it, and I love the vocabulary you use throughout the ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark Truth E.1

    hi, welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed reading your piece, it has so much potential. I don't usually read horror stories, but this, I found quite intriguing. (note: everyone has ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: the yellow alarm clock

    Hi! This was a great read, short and sweet. I love how you wrote the dialogue, " "Okay." I hug him back. "Understandable, I guess. 'Cause you're my bestie. But ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Will Love You for the Rest of My Life [bonus]

    I really enjoyed this poem. You did an amazing job with the rhythm and flow of the poem, it's so nice to read and I love the rhyme, the words ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl

    Hi, this was a great read and I really enjoyed it. I love how you split up parts into small chapters, but throughout chapters 11 to 14, I feel you ...

    Jan 3, 2023


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