veeren

i think this is excellent. putting a lot of thought into a novel really pays off when it comes to actually writing it. of course, i must play the devils ...

alright mr avalon dante sir, youre gonna get a review from moi. i will do this in two parts, starting with the nitpicks, then continuing with a review of the ...

okay vypsies i gotcha im gonna try to do this a bit more methodically (as in write this while i read it) so dont kill me if it makes no ...

yo yo, veeren here to critique your adorable little poetry here. alright, first off is your structure. of course to be poetry, it usually has to look like poetry. now ...

being an extrovert, this may be a bit difficult to review. wait no, its because its a poem >.> well then, i will critique you on two subjects here; one ...

heyooo xp alright, as my poetry skills aren't quite as up to par as some of the other fellas on here, you probably shouldnt take any of my words to ...

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Yo Leo. Big block of text is never good. First of all it's almost always formatted in correctly and it's just a plain eye sore to look at. But that ...

It's me again, and this is just total coincidence ;) Okay first off, again, you should rate your work. There is not so child-like material thrown in here and reader ...

Yo, fortolo. I'm not the biggest poet, but I'll give you my honest opinion on the piece. This was just great. A lot of people can connect to this on ...

Well then, this was both fabulous and ridiculously annoying at the same time. I'll give you my thoughts after these nitpicks. That god damn Rim fire won’t stop. God damn ...

Yo, I actually liked this. So before I tell you my thoughts on the piece I have a few nitpicks for you. Pull yourself together, Lexi, you're a junior. Formatting ...

So this is what you force me to review. Fine then. Out of patience and full of fear she began the long trek from the hospital, to her home. Take ...

Yo, FloPo, it's VeeWee to reevee... you, this work. If you know what I mean. “Finished.” See because this is mixed in with the rest of the paragraph and given ...

Yo, schvork, I'm here to review this proliggy-log of yours, dawg. Let's start with the nity-wity-pickys. ve vill ve starting in ze next This accent of yours is inconsistent, forizzle. ...