Yo, fortolo.
I'm not the biggest poet, but I'll give you my honest opinion on the piece.
This was just great. A lot of people can connect to this on a personal level, thinking lowly of themselves while others see them as treasure. It seems kind of cliche, but at the same time it's entirely relatable.
They way you describe both points of view makes it even better. You get how one side feels compared to the other, and the contrasting ideas are brilliantly shown. Though this could've been done a bit better by literally having two points of view. It would allow you much more room to work and flesh out the piece. But hey, that's just my opinion
See now this line was absolutely amazing. The sense of nostalgia one can get from this is unbelievable. I think everyone has something they cherish, whether or not they use it all the time. But the emotion one feels when picking up an object with so much memories is indescribable.
But before I continue rambling, good job. I loved the poem.
Keep up the good work and don't judge me on my terrible poetry reviewing skills.
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