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Heya Jellyfox! Okay, before I review this, I just have to tell you that this is in NO WAY a bad poem. I'm not really a poet so everything I ...

Hey there RJD! First off, even it's obvious, this is big block of text, and most people tend to not want to read through one. And second, you seem to ...

Hey soulkana! You definitely have an interesting story going here, the only things ruining it are a few grammatical errors. But Alas! That's where I come in. In the first ...

Hey Sanskar! As Macyblak pointed out below, there are WAY too many grammatical errors. The first paragraph should look like this; You don’t expect me to call write to you ...

Hey there JayShay! You've got a nice story here, but there are a few mistakes. I'm going off reading this chapter alone, so if any of these issues were brought ...

Hey Seraph! :D It looks like Megsus pointed out most of the nit-picky stuff like the grammar and the paragraphing, so I'll just have to stick to what I think ...

Puck, even though I've never told you, I love your writing. It always feels so personal, and the emotions you put into your work is given back to the reader. ...

Hey Klara! :D I'm here to tell you how amazing that was review your work. First off, even though it's obvious, this isn't written like a normal short story. I ...

Hello again Yubbies! I'm guessing you tried your hand at a descriptive piece here. I'd say you did pretty well. While you definitely could've done a better job with your ...

Heya CrazyGirl :D So you have a few gammatical errors here and there. In the first paragraph, I ran away that night and never looked back . I had to ...

Hey there katngo :D First off, I have to thank Palm Tree #1 for explaining what Palm Tree #2 said towards the end of the passage. It really cleared up ...

Hey there Tori :D Having written a few screenplays myself (very amateurishly, mind you), I thought it'd be interesting to view someone else's work. Since you're only interested in the ...

Hey there Yubbies :D I think you got a nice refreshing story here. It's been a while since I've read from the point of view of an inanimate object. But ...

Hey there CJ :D I'm not gonna lie, I only chose to read this because of how short it was, but I'm glad I did. I feel like it's part ...

Hey Alvarin :D This was one of the best works I've read in a while. While you're right about it being a bit confusing, I'm sure everything will be cleared ...