vampirelover101

Its an amazing piece that you wrote. Its so sad but it tells a really interesting story. Great job. =)

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment because i wasn't sure if my work was good. But thank you.

I love this poem because honestly I believe that it tells or speaks to the reader how bad and messed up our world is. And that there could be a ...

You did an awsome job in your writing.

i know i have a few spelling errors and purplepretzal she fell asleep and woke up in hevan

I like it but it doesn't make sense. But you should still write. Your a very good writer. Your poem sounds really good like it sounds down to earth and ...

I like the poem, but it doesn't make sense. Why r u staring at someon? I'm just asking. But other than that it was a good poem.

Great punctuation in your poem. I really liked how you described it. I think your a really good writer and you should keep up the good work. :D

The poem is good, but i think that maybe you shouldnt write about something that you really feel. But im not sure if it is your true feelings. other than ...

It was good, but the ending was a little vague to me. i think you need to elabarate more on that but other then that i really enjoyed it. keep ...

I liked it

Ur poem was so beautiful it tellsnhow someone really feels about life I think u shod post slot mor stuff like that thnx for posting

Thnx for the advice mistakes were my suckish computers fault but I like it the way it is and no one can change it I hoped u liked it and ...

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!