Temptation

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He's a monster with his heart full of hate.
He stays and haunts her. Brings her to his gate. 
A fallen angel who was sentenced to Hell.
And yes she knows his story well.
He makes her nightmares appear. 
He's the on who draws her near.
She's helpless yes! to the devil's song. 
But she's so tempted to follow along.
He tricks her mind and makes Hell seem great.
As she stands at his gate.
From her eyes everything seems well.
So she enters the gates of Hell. 
Now gone for ever because of the sensation.
She lost everything because of temptation. 
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This poem is great! It has a lot of truth, and it is written very well. nice job, keep writing! =)

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