Temptation

by vampirelover101

Published March 25, 2012

In poetry

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He's a monster with his heart full of hate.
He stays and haunts her. Brings her to his gate. 
A fallen angel who was sentenced to Hell.
And yes she knows his story well.
He makes her nightmares appear. 
He's the on who draws her near.
She's helpless yes! to the devil's song. 
But she's so tempted to follow along.
He tricks her mind and makes Hell seem great.
As she stands at his gate.
From her eyes everything seems well.
So she enters the gates of Hell. 
Now gone for ever because of the sensation.
She lost everything because of temptation. 
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Shakespeare wrote a review Review · Mar 26, 2012

This poem is great! It has a lot of truth, and it is written very well. nice job, keep writing! =)

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment because i wasn't sure if my work was good. But thank you.



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