unsocialbutterfly

I really like this! I like fall too so :) the only thing I noticed is in the last stanza last should be lasts. Anyways it's a pretty poem :)

I like this. It's really sweet. But it's meant to be a poem right? Because it should be in poem form. I don't like though that you said he/she will ...

You're writing is good. I do have to say though please, please, please don't do that. I believe that's what turns guys into a jerk. There's nothing wrong with a ...

I LOVED this. There Is no way I can tell you over the Internet, nothing I could say would tell you how much I love this. I am going through ...

Aw, I like this! Thanks for telling a little about yourself :) stay strong though i know this must be frustrating for you, or at least it is for me. ...

You write beautifully. I do have to tell you, however, that there is a God. He's not the wooden statue in a church, and church most certainly is about God. ...

O, my Jonas, you didn't "beta it at full capacity"?!? I love this! Your writing is beautiful! I'd love to hear a back story! I only saw 2 things. 1 ...

Hey! I just have some grammar things for you :) learnt should be learned I think... This should be: And so she watchES the ghosts return to ground And she ...

I kinda like it. I think it sounds good and also you obviously felt like you needed to write it. Always write when you need to, don't ever, ever stop. ...

Hey Anna! I realllyy really liked this. It's really beautifully written, I like the imagery and everything. Mostly I'm feeling your angst right now hehe :) I have nothing to ...

Hey CharityDawn! I think this is really nicely written. I get frustrated with short stories because I feel like I'm missing something but that's just me haha. It's really nice ...

This is a beautiful poem and beautifully written. I have nothing else to say and nothing to criticize.

This is great. I do have a couple of picky things though: instead of saying away twice I would just say "all have gone." Also instead of "that if you ...

I really like this. You don't often write poetry? I wouldn't have guessed. The only thing is why is We in bold? I don't know. And also something about the ...

I like this. You wrote this beautifully. I really like the way you wrote the first stanza, something that could have taken one or two lines said simply, you turned ...