Melody Of Colors

by Dragongirl

  • Poetry

Published October 17, 2012

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Been a while since I've posted. Wrote this poem the other day and thought I would put it on here. Hope you like it. :)





Melody of Colors


Fall has arrived as dashing as always
In a swirl of red, orange , and gold.
It sweeps in on a wind that is chilling and fresh,
Blushing, excited, and bold.

Its a season whose coming is as old as the earth
Yet its beauty remains without age.
From the bite in the air, to the hue of leaves
Its radiance one can not gauge.

The joy of change, a music all its own,
A melody of color and light.
Join in with the song of Fall while it last
Before time finds its wings and takes flight.



Please let me know what you think. -DG
Comments & reviews · 2
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unsocialbutterfly
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unsocialbutterfly wrote a review Review · Oct 18, 2012

I really like this! I like fall too so :) the only thing I noticed is in the last stanza last should be lasts. Anyways it's a pretty poem :)

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MaxZero1496
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MaxZero1496 wrote a review Review · Oct 17, 2012

Really good. Fall is the most colorful season.
Only caught a few mistakes:
Second stanza, should be whose instead of who's.
Its possessive doesn't require a apostrophe. That's in each stanza, i believe.
And finally, in the second stanza, radiance is misspelled.
This is a GREAT poem, and the good rhyme, beat, and emotion far out-shadows any petty mistakes. Great job!



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