ultraviolet

Here to review as requested! To start, nitpicks. There she goes, The golden girl , The one , my lover's holding . How is the MC's lover holding the golden ...

Hi! So, I'm not going to nitpick because I don't feel I can. I mean, there are spots I could point out, but I think that would ruin this for ...

'Ello, there, ultraviolet here!

You can throw me in a dirty pot; make me into a boiling stew; Take away this A. It will help with the flow. But the pain I give myself ...

Hi, there! Her dress of blue silk to her knees, Did you mean, "Her dress of blue silk hung to her knees"? She walked like a swan as she made ...

I sprang into the fight, wildly swinging my sword with adrenaline before I regained control of myself. I pulled my adrenaline under control and swung my sword at a short ...

This photograph m that I kept at heart. But alas, I never had the chance, from my camera, I fell for you, Something I need to mention is your vocabulary. ...

As a short little piece, this is nice, but I think you could make this even better. You talk about missiles and dangers and how Wonderland would be safer. I ...

Hi there! :) “Screech!” It's a sound, not dialogue. Take away the quotation marks and italicize it. The ear-splitting sound of mutilated metal and shattering glass Because, like "shattering", it's

Like storiesandsuch said, good idea, but worded a little awkwardly. Silencing the imagination is the crue l lest thing one can do to another. This sounds... wrong. "Silencing the imagination" ...

Talk about flash fiction. xD Her long black curls trail ed behind like a wisp of smoke from a fire for a moment before disappearing like the rest of her. ...

'Ello, ultraviolet here!

Hi! ultraviolet here. :) Okay, so I didn't read the reviews so sorry if I repeat something. Master Newbie was one of Generator’s favorites, not only that, but Newbie would ...

Hi, Wolfie! Two men stood in a forest. They were trying not to been seen by a girl and her friend, who were walking and laughing. One was older, with ...

Oscar Zoroaster Phadrig Isaac Norman Henkle Emmannuel Ambroise Diggs had a dentist appointment at precisely 3:00 pm. Why is his name so long? Unless there is a good reason -- ...