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Re: ...
That is a really good poem.the way you wrote about the strings i thought was great. i couldn't find any thing wrong with it either. keep on writing,can't wait to ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: In My Dreams
I am open to all opinion's.State your mind but remember i am only in 7th grade but doing 8th grade work.
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Love is cancer
what i have to say is all is fair in love and war, and love hurts some times.
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: A Reflection
You blame other's for the mistakes you did, even though your own glass is covered by a lid. You think you are the best, but you are no better than ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
it is a very very good is short but it says a lot if you know what I mean.keep on writing.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Every Good Boy Deserves Favour
it is great.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: This Love
it is great.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: My shining light
it is a great poem/short story.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: At the Sakura Tree
i loved the poem it is really good.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Love of the World
good poem.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: kiss, hug, cry
it is a very good poem i like it.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Within the Wings of Angels
it is a very good poem.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Tempting Fate
it is a very good poem.i can picture it in my head.
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: heart of glass
i love it!!!!!!!!
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Seaside Secrets
it is cool.
Oct 13, 2010