Love of the World

by cade3lit

Published October 12, 2010

Can you hear him?
Can you hear the sound of the world?
The trembling melodies
Of ingenious methods
Of combinations and flirtations
The prickly strings that
Cause the ringing of bells
In your ears
Do you hear him?
He's using his fingers to bind
The world together
To make all people
United in one way
The start of a tradition
Of how the world will be
He will use the strings of sound
To astonish the world
And his fingers tickle
But he keeps surprising
He continues the ringing
The ceaseless, blissful ringing
In your ears
Can you hear him?

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asweeney1919
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asweeney1919 wrote a review Review · Oct 15, 2010

cade3lit wrote:Can you hear him?
Can you hear the sound of the world?
The trembling melodies
Of ingenious methods
Of combinations and flirtations
The prickly strings that
Cause the ringing of bells
In your ears
Do you hear him?
He's using his fingers to bind
The world together
To make all people
The same in one way
The start of a tradition
Of how the world will be
He will use the strings of sound
The ones built to amaze
To astonish the world

But he keeps surprising
He continues the ringing
The ceaseless, blissful ringing
In your ears
Can you hear him?

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turtlethatroars
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turtlethatroars commented Comment · Oct 13, 2010

good poem.

*singerofthenight* wrote a review Review · Oct 12, 2010

cade3lit wrote:Can you hear him?
Can you hear the sound of the world?
The trembling melodies
Of ingenious methods
Of combinations and flirtations
The prickly strings that
Cause the ringing of bells
In your ears
Do you hear him?
He's using his fingers to bind
The world together
To make all people
The same in one way
The start of a tradition
Of how the world will be
He will use the strings of sound
The ones built to amaze
To astonish the world
And his fingers tickle
But he keeps surprising
He continues the ringing
The ceaseless, blissful ringing
In your ears
Can you hear him?



Well Done. Keep writing:)

Singer



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