At the Sakura Tree

i loved the poem it is really good.

O.K. so, I like the second drawing best because it is kind of my style of drawing. But, I think you should lightly shade in the branches behind the leaves of the tree. Also, on the lower right hand side you missed the ground. I can see all the original pencil lines as well. I would get my eraser out. Haha sorry for reviewing a photo when you posted a poem.

Here is a great Dictionary/Thesaurus to find antonyms and synonyms.

At the Sakura Tree

At the Sakura Tree is where I will wait, This line just a bit quirky and is kind of a mouthful when you read it out loud. I guess it could be just me. I would rephrase it. Maybe like: At the Sakura tree I will wait,
at the place we once met,
and the place we last met. I think 'at' and 'and' are both unneeded and take away a lot from the rhythm and sound. O.K. read the two lines with 'at' and 'and' out loud then read them without what do you like better?

Like a first
and last kiss, These short lines make it seem really choppy these to lines could easily be one. You may think having a couplet by itself as a stanza is bad, but it really isn't.
you were always on my mind. I really like this stanza.

You would always stroke me gently
whenever I'd done something bad, O.K. I changed I've to I'd. Because I've is present tense and the line before that you were in past. Well, actually for the whole poem.
just to show gratitude. Why would he/she show gratitude when the dog (I am assuming) did something bad?

I could I think this should be changed to 'can' because if the speaker is remembering then it sounds weird to say I could. Because of course he/she could see the face unless he/she was blind. see your face
giving me a crooked... I don't really get the crooked part. If the smile was broken why would the ... thing have said it was crooked. How could he mistake that?
no... a scrap the 'a' because you also say 'a' in the line after this and you have said it one too many times. broken smile.
A smile filled with joy
and sadness.

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And how does it feel? I don't get this line. First all 'does' should be changed to did if you want to see the consistent tense. Second of all if the fox (I am assuming) is remembering wouldn't he/she know what it felt like?
When you wrap your arms
around me,
embracing me.

But... This is the most overused form of punctuation right next to commas. But here a comma is correct. you haven't come lately,
when will you?
Will you come back
and groom this scared little fox
once more?

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Would will you come back?
I'm not finished,
my story is still going,
but it can't go on to a new chapter
by itself. Why do these words get there own line? Why do you want to stress their importance?

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You're not coming back are you?
How long has it been
since you were gone?
I can't remember you face clearly anymore,
but I still remember the warmness from your hand,
so I'll wait for that feeling to come back to me.
I will wait, waiting for my first
and only friend.

Krp0 wrote:

But... your haven't come lately,

typo. it's you, not your. or you're. lol, it was a good poem, though!

But... your haven't come lately,