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Hey :) Loved the imagery and feeling this poem had! Great job with that :) But what is it with all those capital letters ? :P probably something your computer ...

Hey , Nice poem ! I especially liked the first line of the second stanza saying " how I'll wake with your teeth mark tracks along my back ". If ...

Hey :) Oh wow that was a great poem ! The spider's thread is a great metaphor. Just one thing the part where you say "Gone ...... Unless, " you ...

Oh my gosh ! That was so amazing ! If this was actually a song it would be playing on repeat. The words are perfectly fitted and carry the message. ...

Hey there :) That was .. fascinating ? I'm trying to find the right word to describe your poem with :P Fascinating as in it caught me and made me ...

I love the way pain and sickness mix with love in this poem :) You have compressed all your ideas into a short and powerful message. I like how you ...

Hey there :) So I pretty much liked this poem. It was an interesting topic, I liked how the girl felt so close to the old house. But I'm scares ...

Heyhey :) So I'll go ahead and do some reviewing :P I liked the poem , it was very straight forward and carried a good message. Horrible memories hunt everybody ...

Hey :) So i really liked it. The dark feeling in it and the interesting choice of words. I see you have used a theasorus ;) but just saying that ...

Hahahahahahaha , that was pretty genius :P Seriously hilarious but really describes what is going on right now. The topic isn't actually that funny , i meany poor ponies but ...

Hey :) So i quite liked this poem . It was on a topic that not many write about which made it interesting , the poems on worn-out topics are ...

Hey there :) I will try to review you today ;) I enjoyed this poem , it was quite nice and dark . But i also have some suggetions / ...

Hey there :) I'm gonna go ahead and review this little story :) It was a very lovely little story. Sounded like a small , loving family that you could ...

heyhey :) I really like your poem :) It just tastes like fear, i read the first lines and i was like ' That is exactly how it feels to ...

Heyo there ;) It's true. Alot of people have a face they use around their friends , to cover up their real face . Or their real 'me' . The ...