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YOOOOOOOO This was like a super good poem first of all. Your style of writing is really easy to read and just understand what is happening, the exact opposite of ...

Oh the pictures are a nice touch, I like it. How did Scarlet, the savior of the world, know that everything would be alright if she felt like she wasn't ...

Holy cow this is a real cool idea. Negative thoughts almost seemed comforting to me, and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. You feel alone because I ...

Strong start to this story in my opinion. It has a lot of good imagery making it easy to picture exactly what is happening. I was definitely not expecting him ...

Yeah this was super good. It kind of reminded me of one of those slow piano ballads with a singer who sounds very sad. From my impression the narrator was ...

Hello, Cool First sentence, I thought it was a pretty good hook. I also liked the concept of the characters being able to talk to each other at all times ...

Hello! There is a lot of emotion built into this poem, which I think is awesome. It felt like a huge release of just all this emotion that had built ...

I really enjoyed the atmosphere in this chapter. It felt like something out of pirates of the Caribbean almost. I could easily picture him sitting in the tavern spinning a ...

Hello, To start off I just want to say that I think you have written a character that is very easy to relate to, at least to me. Not wanting ...

Not sure if this is what you're going for, but it feels more like a play than a novel, not that there is anything wrong with that. A lot of ...

Ill split my review into two parts just like you did :) Two: I'm definitely starting to recognize the connection the two girls have together, at least what they used ...

That was pretty funny haha. But does getting your hair cut ever really hurt this bad? Also the only kind of clutch I know is a car clutch. Maybe different ...

Hello, I thought this was a good first chapter overall. I didn't really care for the opening paragraph. I thought it felt a little too much like a book report ...

I thought this was a really really good first chapter. I feel like I could see in my head exactly what was happening because your imagery was amazing. It allowed ...

First of I would just like to say that I was very excited for this after reading the prologue. I liked the imagery seen in the beginning of the chapter. ...