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AllisonArgent and I apparently had the same reaction before we got to the end xD I was thinking to myself; "Did they put this under 'Humor' for the ironic value? I don't understa-..... Ah. How clever."
Seriously though, this was marvelously well written for what it was written about. I couldn't help but think that you are an incredible emotive writer, and to think that this was for such a lighthearted subject !!!
I don't think much can be said (at least not by me) that could improve or offer advice on this, so I'll keep it simple from here on out
Before I reach the end of this, when the humour becomes readily apparent, your structure is still quite smooth and easy on the eyes and mind. Would I be wrong in assuming that this poem is actually mainly from the POV of "Ms. Bloomwood's" hair itself? That truly would be the icing on the cake xD
Anyways, sorry for this review-that-doesn't-really-review-very-well, but hey, I tried Keep up the great writing and know that I will be looking forwards to reading more of your work! Cheers
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