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  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: Loneliness

    Hi, tropical mango here for a quick review!! This seems quite a dark topic, and I like the way it was explored in a very emotional manner. Your use of ...

    Aug 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Flight for Two

    Hi, tropical mango here for a quick review. This poem had amazing imagery, managed to hit all the emotional omphs and was personal. The use of language and structuring was ...

    Jun 10, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Letter to memories

    Tropical mango here for another review after reading your previous poem!! This poem was really a different vibe from your last one, it takes a micro view at someone's life ...

    Jun 8, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Observations

    Hi, tropical mango here for a quick review. I absolutely love poems with imagery, and there was an abundance of that here, along with the "open to personal interpretation" aspect ...

    Jun 8, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The Duality of Humanity

    A different type of poem that aims to explore one of the fundamental aspects of the human condition, the presence of duality, similiar to the chinese concept of the yin ...

    Jun 8, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: To Love or Not To Love

    Hi, tropical mango here for a quick review. This is an interesting poem that delves into the intricacies of love, specifically about those who dish out copious amounts of love ...

    Jun 8, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Questioning

    Hi, tropical mango here with a quick review. To be really honest, I didn't quite like this poem. Why? Well, to me, poetry is about the expression of self, the ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Writing Like I'm Running Out of Time

    Hi, mango here with a quick review! No one else mentioned this but I felt your choice of theme to explore was really interesting, which is like meta-writing in a ...

    Jun 5, 2023

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: Midnight Chronicles

    Hi there, as a fan of the Addams family series who has watched both the live action and animated versions, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing. Firstly, I felt that the ...

    Jun 5, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Two-faced

    Hi, a new user here, yours is actually the first piece of writing I've read on this site :). I love the constant contrast of adjectives throughout, with "priceless" and ...

    Jun 4, 2023


As a writer, I'm more interested in what people tell themselves happened rather than what actually happened.
— Kazuo Ishiguro