Hey there I just wanted to leave a review you did an amazing job.
"I love someone who forgot how to love
From hurt and tribulations, they've guarded their heart with barbed wire
Lowered the volume of their emotions to mute. " I can relate to this so deeply it's
almost painfully.
"Living in fear
Of how high a probability their pain will return
Worse than before
Living in fear of the odds
That have never been in their favor." I completely love the way the words go
together here . I also relate to this. I think things are always going to fail and
I'll be hurt in the end.
"Shadowed by sleepless nights
Tired eyes and throbbing headaches
Solitude is their false sense of safety" this is my default setting. You nailed it
perfectly.
"And now we are all facing the after math of our selves
Refusing to live in a world of mirrors.
We reject ourselves
Unable to face anyone
Who portrays the same failure
We guilt over ourselves
Feeling trapped in our own living hell " Very powerful VERY moving.
" It is hard to live
When everyone is living
As if they are already dead" Everyone is so materialistic looking at their phones
and social media seeing how we're supposed to live that we're basically living like
we're dead. Perfect telling of that.
"To endure nothingness is one thing
It becomes a habit
A bland, black and white routine
A flat, matte surface of composure and unoriginality
But to endure nothingness
Together " Working, sleeping, working and sleeping no relationships just people
living bane existences together but not together. Well worded here as well.
Overall amazing first work can't wait to see more of your work GREAT JOB!
Points: 68
Reviews: 22
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