tragicHearts

Time to review but keep in mind i dont know alot about poetry. I really think this flows beautifully,it got me hooked right away. Why you have to be mean? ...

Hi decided to give you a review since you gave me one. I'm hooked from to start to finish was excited to see what's going to happen. I did get ...

Here goes my review hope you find it helpful more then not. First is the length, try on the next one to cut it into parts. I have found on ...

Wow this really touched my heart and reminded me of a time I wanted to fly. I you captured that need to escape from something in a very deep moving ...

Not an expert on poetry but here's my thoughts anyways. I found this to be a very empowering read mixed with a little sad. This has a lot of truths ...

Even though I dint know a lot about poetry I still love to read it. I thought this has a good flow which drew me and kept me reading.I personally ...

I really enjoyed this and didn't mind that it's short. I think it might help to break it up into smaller paragraphs. Other wise the flow is nice and keeps ...

I haven't read your prologue but wow this was great. The characters seem interesting and I find myself rooting for them to exceed. Now I just need to go read ...

I enjoyed this part more then the part before this even though it is long . I didn't catch any grammar or spelling errors. What a crazy doctor you thought ...

This is a great story so far and I didn't find any flaws. Though I do think you could benefit from describing the characters features a little more. Otherwise looking ...

Well first I think you got something that could be really great. I didn't catch any grammar or spelling errors and you did really good with describing. Really the only ...

I found this very interesting though I do have a few thoughts to share. One dose she die and come back to another realm or stay in ours. I didn't ...

I'm not great at writing yet but I agree with everyone else who reviewed. Bad grammar like using u instead if you and a lot of missed spells words. I ...

Hello I'm new to this site and not the best writer so bear with me.I found this very interesting and pretty good amount of detail to keep me reading. I ...

I loved it had a enough detail and emotion to keep me reading. Also kept me on my toes was really rooting for her to make it. The ending wasn't ...