tinkembell

:) I liked this, I won't nitpick because it has already been done, but the title should be sincerely not sincery, other than that, very good :D Keep up the ...

Impressive :) I really liked this and I can't find any faults - except the capitals! If you put a comma then you shouldn't put a capital on the next ...

:) loved it. Can't find any faults either. Just goes to show you shouldn't give up, it took you what, two years to get this on featured works? :P keep ...

:) You have a point, I agree with you and armstronge, people don't want to wath or read about perfect things because to them, it's ordinary, normal and boring even ...

Very impressive :D Really good use of detail too. a bit confusing for me but I loved it all the same. Only fault; YOUR PUNCTUATION HAS WANDERED OFF! :O sorry ...

:) I really liked this. I agree with charcoalspacewolfman though; it does sound unfinnished. Oh and you might wanna get some punctuation in there too. Apart from that it was ...

wow, really good :) only fault being this; My cap against , T t he chain-link fence, M m y eyes glued , T t o tight offense. obviously that ...

Hi, Tinkem here :), this is how I would change this (not that it was rubbish to start off with, I thought it was quite good :P); [center]Rose petals fall ...

Wow, really good :) only fault is the speech ( I would put a link but I really can't be bothered) but basically eventhough you put a full stop the ...

Wow impressive. I loved how you could convey such emotion in such a short piece, I think the style really worked for you :) Nothing I can really comment to ...

Wow, I thought this was really good, just a few nitpicks; Meanwhile, the troubadour was running towards the sound. He stopped by a huge oak tree, sure that the peculiar ...

Impressive. All I can say, impressive. Only flaw I found was this; her surroundings ; nothing but wood and debris scattered the inside of the church, which now stood without ...

Wow :) I thought this was very good just a couple of nitpicks; Always heard of love but never experienced it. I don't think it and myth actually rhyme Is ...

really good, i won't go indepth because ilovebubbles already did but I want MORE, there just isn't enough for me, what happened at high school? Other than that, very impressive ...

interesting :) only thing is it is impossible to be somebodys younger sibling by a month, plain IMPOSSIBLE. unless you have the solution, please tell me if you do, other ...