Published February 7, 2011
This one is intentionally short, it says what I see in my head. So here we are:
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Thank you very much! Yeah, I know the capitalizing is "wrong" , but it looks better that way to me. I guess I get my drawing and writing mixed up a bit.
That's a brilliant poem, nekros. It really is. I have absolutely no criticism. Just brilliant.
This is a good one... I really loved it a lot.
I like your keen of such marvelous words. It makes the poem look beautiful and original.
As it is said above do not capitalize the words after you have given a comma.
Keep up the great work.
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Nice
It sounds very beautiful, and I can see what you are describing very vividly. My only problem would be the caps after commas, and the ending line is a little random sounding. It sounds good, but it seems disconnected from the rest of the poem.
Keep Writing!
Sierra.
Impressive
I really liked this and I can't find any faults - except the capitals! If you put a comma then you shouldn't put a capital on the next line. Other than that I thought it was very good 
Keep up the writing
~Tinken
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