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I like it for the most part. I think it would be more for little kids then for young adults like are selves.

Thank you. ^^ Oh, and I fixed those little errors. Sorry about that.

Haha, that's really funny. ^_^ How did you come up with something like this? It almost sounds more like a rap then a poem, but it's still really funny. ^_^ ...

It flows very nicely which for me at least is one of the harder things to do in a poem. The rhyming is awesome too. It's not forced like I ...

You need to explain things more. Your writing style is good but through this whole thing I kept going, huh? You really need to explain things a little better. I ...

I get what you are saying but one this is not a poem, and two this is not the place to put this.

This is really good. I'm sorry is one of the hardest things to say to a person if you have hurt them badly. In the 3rd stanza you broke your ...

This is very pretty. It's really well done. =)

Is it a romance? Kind of yeah but its more then just a romance.

I'm a really big fan of the books but this is just so funny ^_^ I love it.

I can't find the second book... :cry: The first was sooo good! I belive you can find in on ebay or

It flows really nicely. I think you are a good song writer and yes your music is worth writing.

If you think about it there is a lot of truth to that song.

This is very good I like it a lot. ^_^