Published November 8, 2008
Never mind its not here anymore.....it wasnt good anyway. 
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
139,536 Literary Works • 672,600 Reviews
sooo anywhoo i probably won't do this agin going for a haiku, but i guess i did it wrong
Thanks!
the guy who should stick to music instead of poetry.
kay guys thanks 4 the feedback wont do it agin.
I get what you are saying but one this is not a poem, and two this is not the place to put this.
This isn't a poem. Please post this somewhere else. I don't find this funny. And if you going to post something in the poetry section, make it a poem. Not a statemaent.
okay this is not a poem nor is it nice
Please friend this is not a forum to post your angst against the oppressive popular kids. Well at least not so blatantly.
i get what you mean.
but thats not a poem.