Published November 2, 2008
I'm Sorry.
I'm sorry, I'm not much of a help,
Even at times when you had yelped.
I'm sorry, I wasn't there to help you my friend,
I promise you in whatever way, I'll lend you my hand.
To support and to aid you in my means,
I promise whatever you tell me, I won't spill the beans.
I'm sorry I didn't pick up your calls,
I'm stuck at home studying in the four walls.
I'm sorry I didn't manage to comfort you,
I'm sorry I didn't manage to turn you yellow from blue.
But please, next time, don't make me worry.
You can always tell me online,
I'll always be here for you, and that's no lie.
I'm sorry, I just wasn't there,
Please rest well and do take care.
Just relax and smile,
All your problems will be gone, making it all worthwhile.
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first of all
lol
good job.
no offense..
it wasnt the best poem ive evr read..
kinda typical.
but the kinda poetry i write isnt like that really. sooo.
but my all time favrite part of this poem was the part
I'm sorry I didn't manage to comfort you,I'm sorry I didn't manage to turn you yellow from blue.
But please, next time, don't make me worry.
[b]You can always tell me online,
I'll always be here for you, and that's no lie.[/b]
i actually like the yellow to blue part even though it was a bit cheesey
but the online part was like
my best friend lives in a different state from me
i love him and the only way we can commincate is through computer
many poets don't show that
Hi, thank you for the reply!! (:
This is really good. I'm sorry is one of the hardest things to say to a person if you have hurt them badly. In the 3rd stanza you broke your rhyme scheme and your pater of 4 lines. For me that made it a little hard to fallow.