tiggpanda145

Hello! Well done for creating such a great poem! I really like the references to all the instruments and the sounds they make. The imagery is great and you sound ...

Hello! Nice poem-it really depicts society and the way people look down on others. Well done! Although it is simple, your poem is effective and carries a strong message. I ...

Hello! Wow, what an expressive poem, well done! The message came across loud and clear and I really understand your poem. The imagery is really good! Maybe you could add ...

Hi there! Great poem-the rhyming worked really well and didn't seem forced which is hard to execute and the idea was great too. The reader can relate to your poem ...

Hello! Nice poem! One thing I'd liked to mention is the rhyming-it seems slightly forced but that isn't a big problem. The imagery is good; I can imagine an innocent ...

Hello! Your poem is great-well done! The imagery you have created is very powerful and your descriptions are good too. One thing I would say is that the stanzas are ...

Hello! I like your poem-the descriptions are very detailed and the language is very sophisticated but in some places it feels like you have used words that are not 'relevant' ...

Hello! I quite liked this piece-it was very emotive and there was some good imagery. Although, change this 'alone.stoned. and broken.'-to me it looks wrong so I would put 'Alone, ...

Hello! I really enjoyed your poem-it had great imagery and used personification (I like personification). I like the way the wind-roses' (as Deanie said) are very much like us human's. ...

Hello! This is a great poem-I really like the idea behind it too! I can't really find any flaws and this is supposed to be a review! I really like ...

I really enjoyed your poem (I love anything about the beach). You used loads of really nice sensory descriptions and your imagery was great too. I really liked your opening: ...

Hello! I really enjoyed your poem-I like the way it tells a story and it creates some good imagery too. One thing that confused me slightly was the rhyming pattern-I ...

Hello! This is a great poem-it does exactly as the title says, talks about no inspiration. I found this especially effective because it is exactly and completely how I am ...

Hello! I really like your poem-it's a good portrayal of envy and uses some good descriptions for example 'How the wind steals your perfume' but if I were you I ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem-the idea behind it is great and you used some really nice descriptions in there. I really liked 'And life, with its sharp splinters' because, ...