thewritingdoc

Interesting! I love the use of onomatopoeias. I think this poem is short and sweet right now but has a lot of potential for expansion to a bigger story. My ...

Wow... Beautiful! I'm really truly in love with your work. However, I feel like the title does not suit the piece. It's just awkwardly phrased - it says what you ...

Hi! I'm Doc, nice to meet you :) I liked the darkness of this piece, I've always had a particular interest in mermaids and sirens. Someone very close to me ...

Hi Sunny, I am Doc! I like this piece for its simplicity. It is innocent but describes a struggle that writers often face, even seasoned ones such as myself. However, ...

Hey! I am Doc. Firstly, I like this piece but I am not sure that it classifies under the "horror" genre. It is a little dark, but nothing particularly scary ...

I think we are TV soul mates. Seriously. In addition, I've fallen in love with every single one of your poems that I've read. You have a way of relating ...

Maybe I'm just a sap, but this made tears well up in my eyes. I have a really close relationship with my father, and I'm also a nurse who sees ...

Happy review day, Alex! Wow, what a great piece. I really loved the imagery and the overall message of this. It appealed to my dark and twisty yet still hopeful ...

Wow! I was blown away by this piece. I really couldn't take my eyes off the screen - it was incredibly written - the perfect blend of dialogue and description. ...

Something about your poetry is very sweet and natural - I really enjoy your writing style. The concept of this poem lights up a warm, mushy place in side of ...

Wow! What an amazing, emotionally moving piece. I'll be honest, I don't really like the title. It's too wordy and gives away the theme of the piece too quickly, in ...

WOAH! Talk about a plot twist, haha. The best plot twists come when the reader least expects it, and that is what you have achieved here, kudos to you! I ...

Wow, retro! You continue to impress me with your beautiful poetry. Once again, I shall begin with my nitpicks and progress to my "Omg" phase. "and the combination I did ...

I really liked the way this piece began and ended, but I lost interest somewhere in the middle. It is yet another fantastic concept of yours, so I'll start with ...

WOW! What can I say? I am absolutely smitten with this poem. First of all, the imagery in the first stanza is beautiful and alluring. It really draws in your ...