thetraveler

Howdy! Trav here for a review. I really liked this poem. It linked an everyday occurrence - a dusty shelf of books - to something much deeper and a lot ...

I liked this piece. It had a lot of voice, and altough not a ton happened, it was still very descripteve in what did. I liked the part about their ...

I adore this. With a passion. You managed to bring out my total feelings about mustaches; that I want one. If there is one thing that I disliked about this, ...

I really like the innocence of this poem. It has a certain naivety to it, that makes me feel like this was written from the perspective of a child. It ...

The only that I dislike about this piece is that it's not published yet. This is incredible! I'm yearning for more of this mad, crazy, insane family's "experiments." Trust me, ...

That. Was. Amazing. First, may I commend you on a brillant theme. Of all the ways to die, the gallows is the creepiest. The only problem with this poem is ...

I don't know what to say about this one. You used good detail, and the grammar was fine, but I think that your development of characters was limited and there ...

I don't know what to say about this one. You used good detail, and the grammar was fine, but I think that your development of characters was limited and there ...

Well Done! I really liked your little story , it had a nice charming mood and then rapidly changed to alarm then annoynce. I thought you did a great job ...

I really liked this piece. The way you made it rhyme was good, although I didn't quite get why you made it all in different places... that was confusing and ...

NICE! I really like how your described the voice as "Black Licorice Gum" because one can chew and manipulate a voice in so many ways. (haha sorry I was feeling ...

Short, sweet, and to the point. Well done! I liked how you compared friends to a coat becausr a good friend would guard you from bad things. Similar to the ...

That was a deep read... I like it! I enjoyed how you repeated the part about the birds, because it made it seem like a favorite or something of Him. ...

Wow, good job! I think that your opening scene is confusing. You started out near a pond, with a person restainig from swimming in it, and it was a little ...

Wow! This is awesome! You really have an amazing talent for detail and it shows in this story. I could criticize that she's a little open to this stranger and ...