currently being re-written
I adore this. With a passion. You managed to bring out my total feelings about mustaches; that I want one. If there is one thing that I disliked about this, it's how short it was. Alright, I admit there are two; I don't understand the little rhyme up there. It doesn't quite make sense for it to be there. Otherwise, though, I really like this. I think that it takes a certain amount of blunt bravery to admire mustaches in the way these 3 ladies do. I think, if I am not mistaken, that you have the same feelings for mustaches as your characters, but not the extreme courage they posess, so you merely write about it. I really like that. Personally, if I spillt my soul to the world like this, the world would undoubtedly go insane within the first glance at my scribbles, but that's just from my perverted mind.Anyhow, keep writing!!! I want to hear moar of this!!~TRAV
I really like this! It's fun to read and inventive, I want to know what happens next...
This is halarious. And well written!
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