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I really liked this piece. The way you made it rhyme was good, although I didn't quite get why you made it all in different places... that was confusing and looked like a technical error. (unless it was....)
Anywho, I really liked it and I hope you do more.
I like how you left us wondering....
Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
TRAV
T'was a technical error- last time I try to upload from an iPod
And thanks for the comments